DON`T GO

My head lay heavy on your shoulder
Won`t get to know you when i`m
older, time spent between is now
spent well in some sort of pleasant
hell

Never before realizing we never
had forever

But together we hold on i
don`t want to be strong
together we belong
never separated

Some day i will follow until then
part of me is hollow.

— ziggy, Oct 24, 2009

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Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

hello Edd

So sad when we lose someone dear to us. It feels like we are missing an arm or a leg. That hollow feeling never goes away. You have expressed yourself very well. It is good to have you back! Always, Cat

ziggy

16 years 7 months ago

dont go

enda, patrick collins. hi cat , its good to be in contact again for sure . i had reasons to belive this needed something more but i always trust your comments many thanks my friend , always , zig

Hooded Stranger

16 years 7 months ago

Sadness

Ziggy, an emotional piece indeed...I think many will share the same the same feelings over ones we have lost. That hollow feeling hits hard quite home...a feeling I have every day, and the worst is knowing it is a gap that will never be filled again. Thanks for sharing this one my friend. I agree with Cat, it is good to have you back...I've been drinking Jack Daniels alone these last few weeks! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".

ziggy

16 years 7 months ago

hey

enda, patrick collins. hey we will have to crack open that bottle of jack some day my good man , lol we all lose someone close sooner or later i guess this is not about any one person wrote with a few in mind thanks for reading and the wlcome back ,,,,,,,,,,,,, zig

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Ziggy

Yes a great sad write and I felt in this one. I agree with the above comments and I will catch u on ur next. Lyz. XX