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Oct 23, 2009
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Ever Present
When I think of all I've been through
and think of life and where I've been,
no matter what, I can't help not remembering my friend;
you're always ever present
when I choose what I should do
you're my last hope, and so I turn to you.
~
When there's something that's disturbing me
and I need some time to think,
you're always with me, as I hurry towards the "brink";
you're truly ever present
because you live inside my heart
that's how I know, we'll never be apart.
~
And whenever I get a warning
like that ol' light bulb in my head,
what sparks it, is always something that you've said;
you're so much ever present
when all I see is the end of a rope
you help me focus, and because of you.....I know there's hope !
and think of life and where I've been,
no matter what, I can't help not remembering my friend;
you're always ever present
when I choose what I should do
you're my last hope, and so I turn to you.
~
When there's something that's disturbing me
and I need some time to think,
you're always with me, as I hurry towards the "brink";
you're truly ever present
because you live inside my heart
that's how I know, we'll never be apart.
~
And whenever I get a warning
like that ol' light bulb in my head,
what sparks it, is always something that you've said;
you're so much ever present
when all I see is the end of a rope
you help me focus, and because of you.....I know there's hope !
— docmaverick, Oct 23, 2009
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Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Doc
docmaverick
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks, Jayne....
Antoinette Mar…
16 years 7 months ago
yes Doc:
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Yep
Ailill
16 years 7 months ago
Good
adjei agyei-baah
16 years 7 months ago
straight from the heart