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Ever Present

When I think of all I've been through
and think of life and where I've been,
no matter what, I can't help not remembering my friend;

you're always ever present
when I choose what I should do

you're my last hope, and so I turn to you.

~

When there's something that's disturbing me
and I need some time to think,
you're always with me, as I hurry towards the "brink";

you're truly ever present
because you live inside my heart

that's how I know, we'll never be apart.

~

And whenever I get a warning
like that ol' light bulb in my head,
what sparks it, is always something that you've said;

you're so much ever present
when all I see is the end of a rope

you help me focus, and because of you.....I know there's hope !
— docmaverick, Oct 23, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Doc

I felt as if you were speaking from the heart ... how very beautiful this poem is ... I feel a strong sense of self in this one ... and also it gives hope that you know theres someone there for you ... beautifully writen touched my heart love and hugs Jayne x x x btw the theme was poignantly sad but beautiful :)
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks, Jayne....

...for feelin' it. ALso, I was using this crazy rhyme scheme...and thought it came out a little dis-jointed, but I guess it was okay. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 7 months ago

yes Doc:

This write was directly from the heart, I know the person that is ever present is so fortunate to be so deep a part of you...a beautiful thought.. Love, Antoinette
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Yep

You have a dear friend that will never leave your heart, and I am glad you are accepting their friendship and listening to your heart. A lovely write and I feel you are coming to terms and I enjoyed reading this write. You take care and lots of love to you and yours, and keep that cheeky grin where all can see. Lol. Lyz, XX
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Ailill

16 years 7 months ago

Good

Hmmm.. charming.. it speaks about the image of a friend, close to the heart.. I like how the friend is not named, allowing for readers interpretation.. because it can mean different things, such as God, a beloved one, etc.. to different readers.. If I was writing this I would edit this line from and to 'when all I see is the end of rope' 'when all I see is the end of a rope' Otherwise good flow, good wording..
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adjei agyei-baah

16 years 7 months ago

straight from the heart

This piece was written straight from your heart.How i felt myself in your shoes.I was really touched by this piece.It was emotionally spelt out and i love it.Kudos. Sincerely, Sinnbadd