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Behemoth Leviathan Part 1 (An Homage to Eleazar Ben Kallir)

Woman clothed in the sun
and hair a wilderness
white formed her dark angles
eyes as the black earth
with no relief from the pupil
as pure water the flesh
and water the perimetre
of her body
and dust
the word in the hand
without form her name
like a pool in God's palm...

Man head to toe marked
in the ancient language
of the holy name of God
unutterable by a human palate...

Then at this certain clarion
the angel took the horn of the Lord
the North and South wind awoke
and set upon Behemoth a black shadow 
of dust, a fierce hungry breeze
a hum with flies
to tear his soul apart
Head to toe a single wound
limb from limb
until the flesh stripped from the bone
and scattered to the four corners
of the black leafed forrest

Cervix glinting in a ray of blue
water spiralling the cove beneath
Leviathan held him without release
inside her belly and therein the seed grew
talloning away at the inner fabric of her womb

She bled him out of her skin like a poison
screaming her claws through her oil bed
she nearly drowned in her agony
and heavily from the cave of her flesh tore
at the ox-bow lymphous wave
crushing her children underfoot
she licked at the chars hot breathed in his wake
he abandoned the cove and the river
and the ocean with thought never to return

A shrill moan and the East and West wind
knitted and comforted her
drawing craw and plankton-shrimp
as to sustain her she feasted upon the rays
of the glinting sun in its zenith arc
and she knew the surface air
and learnt to find meat there
and craved after the flesh of the water-ox
his blood and generations to spoil upon












































— Dalton, Oct 23, 2009

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dalton

A very beautiful write and strong. I actually found it a little sad. Looking forward to part 2. Love Lyz. XX
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Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

well, well

I felt this was brilliant and thought provoking. I just wanted to keep reading on and on but that's just me I like this kinda stuff. like an unspoken language and wisdom its breathes to me. thank you dalton its been awhile since I've been able to actually relax and read a bit. bravo! -shells
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

I do so love your words

I do so love your words Dalton. I love the feelings and images you project. ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dalton

I agree with all the above comments but would like to say this is a little masterpiece I will comment on its whole after I read part two .. but brilliant write well done ... kind regards Jayne
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Dalton

15 years 12 months ago

Behemoth - Biblical name of

Behemoth - Biblical name of the Indian elephant god Ganesha, the "Lord of Hosts." His title was adopted by the Jewish Jehova, during the period when he was married to the Virgin Goddess Anath, or Neith, in the temple of Elephantine in Egypt. Jewish mercanaries stationed there worshipped the elephant-headed, virgin-born Lord of Hosts as their own Yaho (or, Yahweh). At the time, the Jewish God was a subordinate spouse of the Goddess who was hailed as "Queen of Heaven and mistress of all the gods". The same Virgin Goddess was the mother, as well as the bride, of the elephant bull-god, according to the standard myth of divine incest created by identification of Father and Son. In india the mother of Ganesha was Parvati, virgin form of Kali. She made him from her own "body-dew" (menstrual blood). A true archetypal son, he guarded her "gate" (yoni) against the entrance of All-Father Shiva. For this Oedipal offense he was slain, but resurrected. Upon the same virgin mother under her other name of Maya (comparable to Mari, the other name of Anath), he begot the next incarnation of the Son of the Lord of Hosts: Buddha, the Enlightened One. The elephant-god was not forgotten by the Jews, but he was dissociated from the later concept of Yahweh, and diabolized. He became the demon Behemoth. In this guise he appeared in medieval demonologies and grimoires, still wearing the elephant head of Shiva-Ganesha. Yet traces of the earlier divine elephant could be found in Jewish tradition. Rabbinical sources said the Passover feast commemorated more than one god. The lamb stood for Firstborn. The fish represented Leviathan, the original wise serpent-deity of Levites. The hard-boiled egg represented Ziz, or Aziz, or Azazel, the god of atonement sacrifices. The bread stood for Behemoth. Leviathan - "Wriggly One", Hebrew title of the Great Serpent Nehushtan, whose worship was established by Moses (2 Kings 18:4). The priestly name Levi meant son of Leviathan, who was once another form of Yahweh even though later centuries converted him into a demon. The bishop's miter evolved from the headdress of Levite priests. (From "The Woman's Encyclopedia of Myths and Secrets)
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

15 years 11 months ago

Bravo Dalton, this was amazing, I would like to read it a number

Bravo Dalton, this was amazing, I would like to read it a number of times, a really interesting story. The first 2 stanzas are beautiful on their own, I got a bit iffy when it got gory, but that's purely my own sensitivity & you pulled it back to my comfort zone very beautifully anyway. Loved this, so full & so passionate & such a brilliant perspective, as a man, the women's sympathies. I am not surprised though. Glad to see you here in evolution, well deserved my man! Cheers xx Anni~ "One isn't necessarily born with courage, but one is born with potential. Without courage, we cannot practice any other virtue with consistency. We can't be kind, true, merciful, generous, or honest". - Maya Angelou
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

thankyou Cloudthings, it has

thankyou Cloudthings, it has a second part, reserve your opinion until you've read them both. thankyou for your kind words, i'm sincerely sorry if my words upset you at all. love and well wises john
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

15 years 11 months ago

Oh John, not at all, nothing

Oh John, not at all, nothing upset me, I loved it. Sorry to give you that impression, I own my sensitivities. This is a great write, look forward to the next. Please don't be sorry I take responsibility for my reactions & that miniscule anyway. You won me with this, even if there a bit of" guts" in it - chuckle x Cheers Anni~ "One isn't necessarily born with courage, but one is born with potential. Without courage, we cannot practice any other virtue with consistency. We can't be kind, true, merciful, generous, or honest". - Maya Angelou
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

That's why its an homage

This poem is actually a rather shoddy fascimile of the original by "Eleazar ben Kallir" you should read the original. If anyone wishes I could post the original. I have tried quite hard to vere off the course of the original. Most aspects of the poem are quite different. Only as in the original the beasts battle over a portion of Eden. In the original they are banished to be devoured for the last meal at the end of time, by the children of Israel. "Kallir" is worth reading regardless. I won't aattempt to publish this piece anywhere else, unless maybe the second piece which veres further off from the original. Thankyou to all above for your comments. john