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Elegy to the clock

The clock is but a death
with a white collar,
a death which enters
every nameless man's house
to gather his riches
and keep them close
to its wooden chest.

Death is but a snake
disguised in all the clocks
you've seen in your grandparents' house
in all the clocks you've held verdantly
like an infant
who only cries because of hunger;
the clocks which have lead you
towards all the stranded rendezvous
and those clocks who knew how to hide the hours
in the patch pocket of time,
when you were ill.

The clock is but a death
with two crosses
around its neck.

The alarm rings and soon
we'll leave our dreams
for an opaqueness
just as distant...

... made of wood.
— Unlight, Oct 23, 2009

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Country/Region: Romania

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Unlight .. cool name btw lol

My word ... this ones very deep and cloaked in double meanings ... very clever ..I will be watching for more writes from you in the future ... I loved this one bravo :) kind regards Jayne
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Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Ionut,

it is good to see you posting again, welcome back, dear poet. This one is meticulously crafted (as always), yet it feels subdued, distant... Was that what you were going for? It also seems to be very different from your other poems, I am curious to see more of your new stuff. Yours, ~Nina
Unlight

Unlight

16 years 7 months ago

Nina, it’s good to see you

Nina, it's good to see you too after a long and unexpected break in which I couldn't find the inspiration to write poems in English. I wrote only in Romanian. This one is more contemplative than my other poems, a bit distant, but not less lived. Thank you for the four stars! Seren, nice to meet you. I'm glad you liked this one. I'll look for your writings also, when I'll have more time. Nowadays I'm very busy. My best regards, Ionut