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the soul weighs 21 grams

(47 days ago she died and now she wanders
down the hallway of mirrored reflections
the glass slowly cracks and splinters
shards float in the pool where visions gather
here she walks as all the waking dead do.)

for
she once was a handmaiden to the solid earth
she was a weaver and made beautiful
dream baskets for all the princes of the world,
wondrous dreams to carry into the underworld

humans
are born with stories to tell
to shake loose the fruit of faith
to speak of living hell
to fashion glory from the sun
sprinkle stardust from every cloud
to open the womb of love
with 1000 ruby lips that lie

to kiss the fragile emptiness
and rise
and rise
an immaculate conception
with a song to sing:
"the ocean refuses no river"




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bbcKO92OGNI
— Kailashana, Oct 23, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Ma

You are breathing in the thin air of the profound now and along with it you have lulled me with your words again .. I cannot fault perfection ... this is just ... Brilliantly stunning ... love and hugs Jaughter x x x x
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 7 months ago

What a voice, what a

What a voice, what a song,what a perfect poem to accompany the energy of this infusion of life. for she once was a handmaiden to the solid earth she was a weaver and made beautiful dream baskets for all the princes of the world, wondrous dreams to carry into the underworld I have a picture of the beauty of all women through this verse. Skillfully crafted. The title is perfect , the whole poem filled with your tender resonance. Beautiful Seabhac
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Anna

This poem is a creation of beauty, reflecting the soul of its creator. "she once was a handmaiden to the solid earth she was a weaver" amazing, Always, Cat
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Perfect

Just so perfect in word and this is a creation of beauty. Love Lyz, Xx
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you beautiful women of

Thank you beautiful women of earth, sun and stars, we are blessed. We are cursed. Between the two, o how we live! Hugs of Love, Anna There are no strangers in Paradise.
DS

Diatom Shells

16 years 7 months ago

wow...

wow I disappear for a while and I come back to everyone growing in the written word. this is stunning to me. your picture-words are like rich oil paintings. your soul has grown to me and it now seems yours weighs 22 grams while everyone else's weighs 21. -shells
Proprietress of Crimson Hearts

Proprietress o…

16 years 7 months ago

Anna

how I love your titles they - by themselves - are already a poem this is a gorgeous write, especially the beginning captivating, as always your Proprietress