DANCING NOT WALKING

I AM DANCING NOT WALKING** "I'm dancing, not walking - into your armsyou needn't entice me with your heady charms - I'm twirling and swirling through Heaven's doormesmorized by you, swaying - aways wanting more. I'm romantic,fanciful, impulsive, and gay -you're pendantic, tiresome, thrifty won't play -yet when you take me in your armsI just melt away... Sexual & stimulatingScorpio untamed,My knees go weak -my resistance goes lame So where to from heremy elusive beauIs it just an experiencefor Fate to sayI TOLD YOU SO...."
BjR October 23, '09
Inspired by this story: *A British pensioner has vowed to keep making his moves despite having his disability benefits cut after he appeared breakdancing on Britain's Got Talent. (Newspaper article 06/18/09)

— Bonitaj, Oct 22, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

Critiques

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Boni I feel like I have read

Boni I feel like I have read this one before .... have you submitted it before and edited it? ... I am dancing not walking into your arms those words and the next few lines are setting off some sort of memory lol maybe its similiar to a song or something ... weird hey but its like I have read it before ..and the story of the pensioner I had already heard of him poor buggar ... Love and hugs Jayne x x x

Bonitaj

16 years 7 months ago

Oops Jayne!

You could be right! I wrote it some time back but when I went through my collection on Neopeot - couldn't find it - so I though aha! I hadn't yet submitted it... I guess one does strange things during a ":dry spell!" Glad to see that season hasn't hit you! lol THanks for always being so present and so ON ZE BALL ;) Boni