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Oct 22, 2009
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My bad poem
A jabberwock a blabber mouth
now don't you get uncouth
its time to stop before you jot
some words regretted
mother fretted
dad
looked on askance
while you did your dance
my dear young thing
my daughter
you shouldn't do things you didn't oughta
now look what you've done
seemingly for fun
tut-tut, fy-fy and hope to die
a death without much pain
and try to stay insane
is all I cry
don't hold the ball too long
just join in with the throng
and tow the rope up the slippery slope
of life
and make someone
an ever loving wife.
— Nordic cloud, Oct 22, 2009
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Critiques
Lonnie
16 years 7 months ago
Doesn't look bad to me, Ann!
Rett
16 years 7 months ago
Ann
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Ohhhh Ann I am working on
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Lol
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
fy-fy what?!