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Oct 22, 2009
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surrender
set him free, insidious demons
here I am, willing
leave no trace of your poison
crawl eagerly to new flesh
haunt me, you vicious fiends!
as his arms seek and surround me
from his shoulders, find mine
devour me, heartless pestilence
let peace find its way to those tormented eyes
my soul is strong
curse me, callous despots
as you probe the hidden corners of my mind
I will shelter his fragile heart
feed on me, voracious plague
as my lips brush his, pass through them and away
over my tongue, deep into the void
I will do battle, you merciless tyrants
my love will form his shield
my sacrifice, his salvation
and you will not return.
— bunnymug, Oct 22, 2009
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Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
hello
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
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bunnymug
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks, Cat!