Telling Secrets

You always do it. This is excellent. It is a very hot day here and this write has it all, please send it, lol. Much enjoyed this Japanese poem. Lovr to you and yours, Lyz. XX

How weird is this ... I am sitting next to a sliding window a big one LOL and well when I was reading this we got a big gust through the window ... NO more wind poems today they are spinning me out LOL though it was 35 degrees here today ... and this breeze is wonderful ... Lyz I am sending some down your way lol should be there in about an hour and a half LOL !! love and hugs Jayne

Beautiful and cunning: "laughing she leaves me." Always, Cat

Okay okay Greeneyes, pop me in the freeze for an hour or two and I'll be freezing and shaking like a leaf while you laugh hysterically! This is a great poem indeed love the way you describe the wind like it is running its fingers through your hair, then turning each strand into an icicle (you'd end up with a hair-do like one of those old fiber-optic lamps!) and then dancing away with giggles on the breeze... you give a ghostly and ethereal feel to the piece and it works so well but the added playfulness really sets this one on the top of the pile for me. A great Japanese style conquered by the glowing green goggle eyed one! Excellent Elizabeth! Dale :)

Short but loaded.You always set me thinking.Love that!

Loved this wonderful Haiku.... Have read your previous ones too, should I call you a Haiku master? ;) Sincerely, Wafi "Culture, location and beliefs; All vanish with love!" ~Afzal Shauq~

on spotlight! Always, Cat

Congratulations on spotlight Elizabeth well done !!

Playful, whimsical, magical Thank you Geeneyes. Words done well! I do enjoy. Peace, frangipangi

This poem and ones before are perfect like haiku master. PHENOM:T.S