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Oct 19, 2009
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My Father's Laughter
My Father’s Laughter
When the life of flowers
is cut off
looking their best
fresh from the morning
sunshine,
onto the silence
of the living room table,
they give us joy only
for a while;
when beautiful sounds
end up encased in a song
of thanksgiving,
the beloved listens to
you ever
more attentively.
But you don’t hear me
anymore than these flowers
I’ve just placed
beside your portrait,
dear father.
The branches have
been broken, and
the weary days
cut off from your
presence
have been a
hindrance to my years.
Nevertheless,
our shadows have kept
growing upon the
silent waters of
younger years,
when we used to scare
the fishes with
our laughter gone by,
running fast with
the river, to fill God knows
what Eternal void!
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seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Hugo
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16 years 6 months ago
Thank you Seabhac:
Candlewitch
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Hugo
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16 years 6 months ago
Dear HugoYour poem is the
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Good Dear O Molly:
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Hugo, You honour
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16 years 6 months ago
My dearest Friend however
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My Dear friend Seren:
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16 years 6 months ago
Great bond between a father
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My friend Adjei-Baah: