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Majnun

As a lamb to the slaughter
so in love is he
as a lamb set to dwell
among wild beasts
he is Majnun
divided from all that he loves
for love of she
for she that he cannot love
lest he bare his throat
to a serpent's maw

Would that she had pity
but pity is a worm in her garden
would that her clothes
were strands of horse hair
and her features transfigured by time
for love of humanity and love her wine
would that her soul were that of Majnun
ah she would be an angel to behold
alas in the eye of Majnun
for all that lives is holy beneath his gaze
aye even Layli...
— Dalton, Oct 19, 2009

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dalton...

Ohhhh... this is sublime... Breath-taking and breath-giving... I am fascinated... Love, Raven. PS Personally... I love the line; "ah she would be an angel to behold". I don't think it's cliched at all. Some words need no improvement, to convey what's in the heart.
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Raven

There are two versions of this poem, one my mum has, and this one, this is the original, the second piece has added to. I'm so glad you like it, I'm never sure of my own work, john
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dale

I too love the line, do not be to worried, this is a magnificent poem and written lovingly, enjoyed it very much. Well done , Lyz. XX
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 7 months ago

Majnun

Daltin And her features transfigured by time for love of humanity and love her wine delectable Electric Blue
mona

mona

15 years 11 months ago

Majnun Laila

Thats how we pronounce the name of (Layli=Laila) this so romantic Mona