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Elevation

Such a state
of agitation
brimmed with fear
and contemplation
for the current situation
finds me longing for respite
Yet the calming
numbing feeling
merely suppresses
mind from reeling
while my fate
its idly sealing
in the isolating plight
while I seek a resolution
I am filled with constitution
hoping for a revelation
to bring within me, elevation
A futile life
I don't desire
So I ask of this great fire
seek out your places
in the mire
ignite my soul
and take me higher

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

What a fast paced write !!

What a fast paced write !! wow ... this was like a race, I felt as if the words would get away from me, the flow was really fast but I felt you need a pause somewhere ... doesnt really matter just spliting it in two somewhere would give people enough time to digest what they have read ... still a great write I enjoyed ... my heads still spinning back there somewhere LOL kind regards Jayne x
press

press

16 years 6 months ago

corina

I loved it but I do agree with JC LOV2U PRESS