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-Calligraphy in the Stars-
Through the breeze
that blows in time,
the precious weave
in leaves of thyme
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Arriving in nowhere
getting up to her knees,
and saw for herself
a wonder of peace
A woman of beauty
that shimmered all time,
the radiance of stature
glowed from the divine
Kneeling before
this nature in gold,
their aura's blended
in ambrosia folds
No questions asked
and no want or need,
she bowed her head
anti-matter of a seed
A purity and rapture
from the halls of heaven,
guide her to light
thy will has begun
Never looking in fear
of searching eyes,
she turned on her heel
but to great surprise
A hand to chest
stopped all retreat,
she let out a breath
and thought to be beat
Her head started swimming
as a voice whispered near,
"Never wonder my child
I've always been here
When pain beats a tempo
with no path of escape,
I stand right beside you
its my hand at your nape
When sorrow sings arias
that peal through your heart,
I dwell deep inside you
conducting hope like Mozart
As grief shakes your core
and shadow swallows you,
in the light of the heavens
it's your name I'll tattoo
When serenity has found you
and nestled you near,
I'll watch from Nirvana
always holding you dear
I may not be with you
in body and mind,
but within all your cells
Is a heartbeat of mine
Know that your beauty
shone from the first,
you've always been humble
its knowledge you thirst
My darling daughter
I'm right there inside,
just open your heart
I'm not that hard to find"
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I write this and wonder
at visions of dreams,
and will this message
slip through times seam
Critiques
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
hey :)
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you for your beautiful
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Only a pleasure
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
LOL I love revisits even
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
LMAO … bad and me go in
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne :)
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
LOL hubby calls me his devil
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne :)
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Liz,I am in the middle
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne :)
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Pmsl …. oOoOooO your a bad
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne :)
hugo la rosa
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Jayne:
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Hugo
Candlewitch
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Cat
seabhac
16 years 7 months ago
What can we leave of value but love
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Liz
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
What if she tattooed a heart
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Omg Jake already has mum
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
I love you and
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Annamom
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
simply beautiful
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ken,Life is full of
Hooded Stranger
16 years 7 months ago
No words.
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Dan
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hey Aunty
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lyz,I have been
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hi Dear Girl
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
WTFFFFFFFFF !!! what sort of
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Oh my goodness
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
PMSL if you laughed my work here is done ...
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hell
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Jesus you got me scared to