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For the 'morrow

The dust has barely settled
from yesterday's itinerary,
we could've concentrated on more details
if we weren't in such a hurry

some tasks were not quite finished
leaving a lot that went, unsaid,
didn't notice all the hearts on which we've tread.

What was left unfinished
we just say, wasn't meant to be,
how foolish is this sentence
geared to set our conscience, free

our integrity out the window
we claim we did the best we could,
it's our "magic" way of turning bad to good.

Quality Control is needed
to measure progress made,
or else the light in our children's eyes
will surely flicker and fade

for we're building their tomorrows
and their faith in us is pure,
we need to concentrate on their future.

We're setting bad examples
and poor standards, as we go,
it isn't real constructive
to pretend that we didn't know

but with tenacity, and hard work
taking each child by the hand,
we can build a bright tomorrow they'll understand.
— docmaverick, Oct 19, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 7 months ago

For the Morrow......

An awesome writing...what we do is plan for the morrow...then when it comes our plans are too many...so we put those off till the following morrow...oh yea..that is what we do...it's just human....enjoyed this write...and it's complex thought... Thank you Doc...
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Yes Yes Yes

Agree, Agree, Agree, Lol. Sorry, I have very similar views about the future we are leaving our kids, even when I am dead and buried, I reckon I will still worry about what was left behind and how they will cope with all our mistakes etc. I enjoy your concerning write, it does put ones mind to thought. We should be building a better future, hopefully this has started, but I have found that some of the kids have great ideas and visions concerning the future. You have amazing insight to the reality we share, thanks Doc. Love Lyz. Xx