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alanna_91
Oct 19, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Dad

No-one understands me, Nobody knows how I feel. The way it hurts when I think of you, Without you my life is gone. I don't know why you ever left us, Growing up without you here. Do you ever think of me, Wonder if we'll ever meet.
— alanna_91, Oct 19, 2009

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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

Very moving

Hi, I really like this one. It is a very moving piece and I understand your feelings behind it completely. Much love Millage x
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Pseudonym

16 years 7 months ago

alanna

Hey there.. although your piece is very very short, i still felt the emotions.. what i also like is, you didn't drag it out, you said what you wanted to and think is needed.. well done :) take care :)
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Hi

A sad tale indeed, and straight to the point. Well done. Love Lyz. XX