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Pipe Dream

When I see you, my heart flutters strangely
As I stare deep into your eyes
There is something about you, baby
That draws me in, but I don't know why?

Take me in your arms and hold me
Want to feel your breath on my neck
Let me caress your head so gently
Our night of passions not begun yet.

Come lead me upstairs with you
And then lt us both lay down
Feel the spark there between us two
When there's no on else around

Now make me the man I should be
And all my dreams come true
This will be a precious time for me
Just to be alone here with you

Don't take this moment from me
Please let it just last forever
I know things aren't really what they seem
Were we really, truly together?
— Millage, Oct 19, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

This is just beautiful

This is just beautiful Millage ... you must love her if you dont ask her out I am going to fly over there and make you or enlist one of my Pommie mates to go make you LOL ... another beautiful write you really love this girl dont you ? ... is speaks through all the words and shines ... and if you dream hard enough anything can happen,thats my experience .... and dreams are just reality unrealised ;) love and hugz Jayne x x LOL I will get Anna to come annoy you as well ...
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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

Sincerest thanks

Thank you Jayne. You are very kind. I am bracing myself for the onslaught from you and Anna already! ;-) Hee hee hee! I have tried Jayne, honest I have!Some things are just not 'meant' to be. ;-) Much love Millage x
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Prepare away but me and my

Prepare away but me and my Annamom are relentless ... we have ways of making you do things lmfao !!! sorry couldnt help myself I am a cheeky aussie wench :) and I totally understand, I too had an unrequented love,thats now a lovely memory .. but nothing like dreaming to make things happen LOL ... yes I admit it I am a dreamer @!!!! hahaha love and hugs big smile Jayne x x
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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

X-Rated

This is true Jayne. there is nothing like dreaming, but some of mine are.....er....how can I put this?............. Graphic! But in a passionate, not filthy way!;-)))) Ha ha ha, now I am making a fool of myself once more! My tin hat is on, the flak jacket has been donned and I am now waiting for the inevitable from you and your ally! You both always make me smile......believe it or not!?! Much love Millage x
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Never a fool !!! but my face

Never a fool !!! but my face hurts from laughing ya ratbag LOL ...and the S.O.S to america has been sent and when Annamom gets here wooooeeeee lmfao !! sorry but this was too much fun ;) hahahaha love and hugs Jayne x x x
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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

I’m kinda guessing my days

I'm kinda guessing my days are numbered now! ;-) This is going to hurt isn't it? Oh no, not again! I want my ma! Boo hoo! ;-) Ha ha ha Much love Millage x
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Depends have you heard

Depends have you heard theres a fine line between pleasure and pain ? pmsl ... omg someone should ban me from the keyboard tonight I am positively evil lmao !! love and hugs Jayne x x x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

MomAnna to the rescue!

MomAnna to the rescue! Frying up some onions now to roast your brother Millage in, dear Djaughter. So, what word in "go for it" don't you understand, oh you dreamer of dreams? Or are you like me, afraid of reality? I am caressed and loved from the inside out; I suspect that it is a man from far away because it just coincides with his dreamtime. So let me say this, your lady KNOWS and FEELS you already, even if she is with another. This kind of astral lovemaking is often more real than reality. So my darling Millage, is your goose cooked now? Love, Anna There are no strangers in Paradise.
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Pmsl … told you I would

Pmsl ... told you I would tell on you hahahaha ... nooooow Mr Millage ... we wait impatiently for your return !!! lmfao Love and hugs and lots of laughs Jayne x x x
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Millage

16 years 7 months ago

FAO JAYNE AND ANNA

Ok, Ok, I get the message. Maybe what I should do is go find her, burst into her work, and then just 'pash her up' there and then in front of everyone?!? Whisk her away in my classy N reg Vauxhall Tigra (which is clearly going to turn her head! Ha ha ha!!!) and back to my pad?!? Anything, ANYTHING to stop you two battering me! Hee hee hee!!! If only it were that simple. :-))) Much love (as ever) Millage x
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Millage

Seriously if some guy did that for me ? LOL I would seriously reconsider how I felt about him ... My Vote is go for it ... sounds like you have actually thought about it before lmao ... with all my love Jayne Btw my friend we only annoy people we like ;) hahaha poor you !!!