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Oct 19, 2009
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Pipe Dream
When I see you, my heart flutters strangely
As I stare deep into your eyes
There is something about you, baby
That draws me in, but I don't know why?
Take me in your arms and hold me
Want to feel your breath on my neck
Let me caress your head so gently
Our night of passions not begun yet.
Come lead me upstairs with you
And then lt us both lay down
Feel the spark there between us two
When there's no on else around
Now make me the man I should be
And all my dreams come true
This will be a precious time for me
Just to be alone here with you
Don't take this moment from me
Please let it just last forever
I know things aren't really what they seem
Were we really, truly together?
As I stare deep into your eyes
There is something about you, baby
That draws me in, but I don't know why?
Take me in your arms and hold me
Want to feel your breath on my neck
Let me caress your head so gently
Our night of passions not begun yet.
Come lead me upstairs with you
And then lt us both lay down
Feel the spark there between us two
When there's no on else around
Now make me the man I should be
And all my dreams come true
This will be a precious time for me
Just to be alone here with you
Don't take this moment from me
Please let it just last forever
I know things aren't really what they seem
Were we really, truly together?
— Millage, Oct 19, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
This is just beautiful
Millage
16 years 7 months ago
Sincerest thanks
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Prepare away but me and my
Millage
16 years 7 months ago
X-Rated
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Never a fool !!! but my face
Millage
16 years 7 months ago
I’m kinda guessing my days
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Depends have you heard
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
MomAnna to the rescue!
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Pmsl … told you I would
Millage
16 years 7 months ago
FAO JAYNE AND ANNA
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Millage