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Oct 19, 2009
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goodbye
Close your eyes my love,
you've been through enough.
tossed here,
tossed there,
nothing was ever fair.
Close your eyes my love,
the blood drips like the love you lost.
a pill now,
a cut later,
its better that it all stops.
Close you eyes my love,
your tears will dry up in a while.
forget all things said,
forget all things done.
dont be strong,
just move along.
Close your eyes my love,
dont look at me
as i set you free.
im sorry
if this hurts.
dont scream
im doing your dream.
Your gone my love,
life will be cold and alone,
but, at least your safe
out of this place.
i will always love you.
you've been through enough.
tossed here,
tossed there,
nothing was ever fair.
Close your eyes my love,
the blood drips like the love you lost.
a pill now,
a cut later,
its better that it all stops.
Close you eyes my love,
your tears will dry up in a while.
forget all things said,
forget all things done.
dont be strong,
just move along.
Close your eyes my love,
dont look at me
as i set you free.
im sorry
if this hurts.
dont scream
im doing your dream.
Your gone my love,
life will be cold and alone,
but, at least your safe
out of this place.
i will always love you.
— Pseudonym, Oct 19, 2009
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Seren
16 years 7 months ago
WOW … I am speachless …
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Bonitaj
16 years 7 months ago
Welcome Ms Kriel!
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16 years 7 months ago
Bonita
greeneyes
16 years 7 months ago
powerful
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16 years 7 months ago
Greeneyes
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hi
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16 years 7 months ago
Lyz
Hooded Stranger
16 years 7 months ago
Oh yes!
Pseudonym
16 years 7 months ago
HS
michael
15 years 11 months ago
Mmmm, very good.