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Neither of us

   Neither you nor I do You can’t seeI’m blind‘Because you don’t want toYou can’t believe I’m deaf‘Cause you haven’t toYou don’t believeI am also dumbDo you know why? I’m blind becauseI can’t see youThrough the computer’s eyeI’m deaf becauseFrom 18000 miles distanceEven Niagara feels shy. You don’t want to believeAs I am really not dumbThough of course speechlessFor the beautyThat contains you,Seeps though my eyesI just can’t believeMy very moist eyes What’s it that you want?I really can’t say,All that my prayer isPresent me your luscious lips I will seeHearAlso speak throughAs foreverI shall alwaysRemain within you.  
— loved, Oct 18, 2009

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yenti

yenti

16 years 6 months ago

Loved You Are

Just a little tidy up and a few minor changes as the theme is good, I look forward to more of your work< yours Ian.T