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Feeling Positive

I am feeling unusually happy today, not in a bad mood anyway, I feel positive, cheery even, it’s not unheard of but is not common. I am not going to get annoyed or upset by anything or anyone, I am going to ignore all the annoyances of before. I am going to sit here and smile, for a little while. I am in a good place at the moment, a happier place than before, the future is looking brighter, so much lighter. Not thinking about the past, the dark place of former days. Back then I was miserable and sad, which felt really bad, but now I am surely in a better place, my team even got 3 points, which put a big smile on my face. It feels good to feel good, wasn’t sure if it would, I have things to look forward to, things to be grateful for, why should I worry anymore? I do feel much better than before as you are by now well aware I’m sure. It feels good to feel good, great to feel great, and now for the next day I simply cannot wait.
— michael, Oct 18, 2009

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16 years 7 months ago

Michael

i really like it.. made me smile and felt the positive vibe.. i just think you couldve made it into more shorter lines but thats just me.. we all have different ways to write.. :) well done for someone who is very new.. take care :)
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magics02

15 years 11 months ago

Yes nice but I do have some suggests

I would love to make some suggests but only when you say it is fine to do so since so many times I have been asked for input and then when I give it sometimes it is not well recieved and I am only helping from my eyes, heart, and mind and knowledge as I am no pro here. Magics Mona