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Oct 18, 2009
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The Void
The Void
Inpsired by WC WAMPLERS poem called ZONE
Where the earth, the sky and water meet. A place I know so well.
We must go to the same zone. Memories echoes of Refocused.
I walk alone as waves return to the shore again and again
as if mocking me tempting me to join them. Leaving my
lonesome foot prints in the sand I look back only
to see the waves wash them away so quickly
Showing me that I do not exist as no one
would ever know I was there
The ocean so alive the forceful waves drop to a gentle
hush under the changeling moon but do I exist, as
everything around me seems to be moving
but me - I am not alive…..
I talk as I walk to the waves of stories unforetold.
Dreams and desires so many bridges are
crossed but just going around in
circles unfulfilled
I walk the woods long and deep until I come to
the creek the splendor of a waterfall
few have seen. Sunlight dances as the tears
everlasting fall in this magic place
of the in between
The earth’s orchestra play melodies
unsung as notes are free falling
into this void - the place of
the in between
Electric blue so Blue
— Electric Blue, Oct 18, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
we carry on and on and yet nowhere.
Electric Blue
16 years 7 months ago
The Void
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
I feel I have to answer now,
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Magz, This is a
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne thank you but I'm not done yet
Electric Blue
16 years 6 months ago
The Void
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
Don't wait go and find
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Maggie
Electric Blue
16 years 7 months ago
The void
Dalton
16 years 7 months ago
A word from Dalton
Electric Blue
16 years 7 months ago
Void