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The Best Revenge

steeped in hard hostility
our love was formed by enmity
burned by rank revulsion
our closeness shaped by their aversion

rejected by cold family
we became the new reality
that frightens all the racists
with nightmares of new genesis

for in the darkness of their hatred
our love was forged hard-tempered
as God’s sword plunged deep into snow
from forge’s white-hot searing glow

and now our depth of family
has no limit of fragility
to break at slightest pressure
of other people’s hateful censure

thus our children are the future
that those who hate can never sunder
the relentless path to peace
the judgmental can never face

so remember this, my lover
when you want to run for cover
the best revenge we can possess
is life, success and happiness
— Race_9togo, Oct 17, 2009

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Region, Country: Earth Vicinity (within a five light-year radius), ZZC

Favorite Poets: John Donne, T.S. Eliot, Serendipity, Emily Dickenson, Kailashana, Charles Bukowski, Kabir, Rett, Dalton, W. B. Yeats, William Blake, Rainer Maria Rilke, and many other Neopoet poets; Neopoet has heavily influenced my poetry and my ability to write it well.

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Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 7 months ago

Hey Pint

Thanks you for you kind comments, and your suggestion. Yes, I agree with the sentiment, 'dig 2 graves when you seek vengeance', although I must confess that I have sought revenge against enemies in the past; yet today I have a family, and so the rule applies. Your suggestion: yes I agree also, although my edit is a little different because I decided that the dark should be a thing in itself rather than a description. Good suggestion though, thank you for it, the line conforms much better with the rest now. Thanks again, glad you enjoyed this! Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 7 months ago

Harsh with echoes of

Harsh with echoes of truth. Grabbed me by the throat and made me read... Ha, ha our children are our revenge on the world! opps I have reeked a lot of future revenge then. Seabhac
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks Seabhac

"Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race