Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Oct 17, 2009
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
The Best Revenge
steeped in hard hostility
our love was formed by enmity
burned by rank revulsion
our closeness shaped by their aversion
rejected by cold family
we became the new reality
that frightens all the racists
with nightmares of new genesis
for in the darkness of their hatred
our love was forged hard-tempered
as God’s sword plunged deep into snow
from forge’s white-hot searing glow
and now our depth of family
has no limit of fragility
to break at slightest pressure
of other people’s hateful censure
thus our children are the future
that those who hate can never sunder
the relentless path to peace
the judgmental can never face
so remember this, my lover
when you want to run for cover
the best revenge we can possess
is life, success and happiness
our love was formed by enmity
burned by rank revulsion
our closeness shaped by their aversion
rejected by cold family
we became the new reality
that frightens all the racists
with nightmares of new genesis
for in the darkness of their hatred
our love was forged hard-tempered
as God’s sword plunged deep into snow
from forge’s white-hot searing glow
and now our depth of family
has no limit of fragility
to break at slightest pressure
of other people’s hateful censure
thus our children are the future
that those who hate can never sunder
the relentless path to peace
the judgmental can never face
so remember this, my lover
when you want to run for cover
the best revenge we can possess
is life, success and happiness
— Race_9togo, Oct 17, 2009
Share this poem
Critiques
Race_9togo
16 years 7 months ago
Hey Pint
seabhac
16 years 7 months ago
Harsh with echoes of
Race_9togo
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks Seabhac