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In the 70's

In the 70's my ma would play
records by Neil and Cliff all day
and let's be honest, those guys are here to stay

I would look forward to my 'mum tea'
of fish fingers, chips and beans
come in from playing, with grazed hands and ripped jeans.

In the 70's I was wearing flares
Would play outside without a care
"Son you're late in, now get up those stairs!"

You would never, ever answer back
You'd get told off and that was that
Your dad was always right and that's a fact

In the 70's, no computer games
we'd play football in the pouring rain
and the 'magic sponge' would 'cure' the pain

We would play outside and would be alright
make sure we're home while it's still light
and get excited about pudding 'Angel Delight!'

And we used to play with the garden worms
no need to worry about the germs
and see old ladies with blue rinses and perms

In the 70's there was no bad luck
I thought I would never grow up
and still be drinking tea from a chipped brown cup

Back then we knew everything was alright
We had no cares in our life
and none of my friends carried a knife.
— Millage, Oct 17, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh Millage

aaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh Millage thank you for the trip down memory lane I was little in the 70's very little but remember the flares and Abba and Queen and some crazy stuff my older brother and sister got up to LOL ... ok I rambled sorry LOL great write love and hugz Jayne x x
M

Millage

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you

Thanks for the 5 stars Jayne. Very flattering. When I wrote it, it brought back so many memories. I don't know if you know about the magic sponge, but if ever you got hurt in football, a 'grown up' would rub your leg with an 'invisible' sponge and the pain would magically disappear and away you went again, running till out of breath! Now who's rambling? Much love Millage x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Such an age of sweet

Such an age of sweet innocence, M. The last line, however, says it all. Since then tha world has gone mad, children playing dirty harry and signs displayed on doors & windows of establishments regarding entry with concealed weapons. Look who's rambling now? ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.
M

Millage

16 years 7 months ago

I don’t know what’s

I don't know what's happened to the world Anna. I find it getting darker and darker each day! Thanks for reading my work hun. Much love Millage x