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childhood (for Timothy Joyce)

                       

                                                                    We awoke in those days
                                                                    with our bellies swelling in
                                                                  private palm-grips of enthusiasm.

                                                                   The bus was a yellow flag screeching
                                                                           to life our hungry allegiance.

                                                                  Life was a finely tuned sound.  A seamless
                                                                 coat, worn, buttoned by an endlessly forgiving
                                                                                           lifeforce.

                                                                 And we wore the steamed dawn
                                                                         climbed the sharp sunrise
                                                                         
                                                                         ate the straying lilypads.

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

This is breathtaking Q. Not

This is breathtaking Q. Not a word to alter. Just a thank you from my heart. I have a feeling I have missed many such lately. ~A There are no strangers in Paradise.
Q

Quillsvein1

16 years 6 months ago

Anna

Thank you so much. I think Wordsworth was right when he said "Poetry is emotion recollected in tranquility", though it's a bit of a broad statement--I was certainly tranquil when I wrote this. All thoughs of adversities (and adversaries, which I do not have) departed from me. GB
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear GB

Love the new picture btw ... pensive deep thoughts ? .... I agree with you wordsworth did get it right, and this poem is just breathtaking as Anna said ... there isnt anything to change its perfect as is ... and I feel honoured to have read it love and hugz Jayne
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bjp

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Quillsvein1,

I do like this poem. And I like to say so too. Brian
Q

Quillsvein1

16 years 6 months ago

Well

thank you, Brian. I'm a fan of your poems too, as I believe you know. Best