Sacrifice

The Saviour

Never the savedNeedful of body.Energy aboundsTouching livesThenLeft aloneWith memories of touchA shadow of angelIn refracted vibrant colourStained by my humanity

— seabhac, Oct 16, 2009

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Country/Region: GBR

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hugo la rosa

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Seabhac:

If we were just able to leave our thoughts for a moment, long enough to feel the innocence of life, we'd see within us the same spiritual qualities of the Savior, pure and pristine as ever, without change. This is the Spirit that is born with all men and women, unspotted, but hardly acknowledged. (He said that we have to leave self behind, isn't it?). That's what's most difficult for the many of us, and that's why we want instead to continue living in this world. But, at the core, at least in my own way os seeing things, we have already been forgiven. Dear Seabhac, you made think deeply once more, and that's what I like about your poems, they are very profound, and very mysterious. Sincerely, Hugo

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Lucky last

read of the morn for me. A very beautiful soulful write, and well written to the point. I love how you always bring your words together. Just magic, Love Lyz, XX. Catch you on your next.

seabhac

16 years 7 months ago

Glad you found this one Lyz

Thanks for you kind comments. Affirmation is a wonderful gift to bestow, still got your woodland in my head. Hugs Liz

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Liz Beautiful

Dearest Liz Beautiful reflection my friend .... I am speachless today I dont have the words everyones writing so profoundly ... sadness in soft folds draped me but it wasn't a tearing sadness a gentle one if that makes sense ... love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x

seabhac

16 years 7 months ago

Missed your presense

I am so often humbled and overwhelmed by the wealth of talent on Neopoet and to be part of this is just wonderful. Thank you Jayne for sharing you thoughts. Love to you and yours Liz