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kitkat
Oct 16, 2009 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Apparition

Those piercing eyes haunt me, follow me, elude me. Your piercing thoughts escape and float around my atmosphere, become my own. In sleepless dreams you follow, a memory of life past, And yet, I am deluded, you did not exist. Where were you discovered? What sacred realm did I summon you from? My subconscious? My desires? My fears? Will I ever send you back? You have become my ghost. My nightmare. My past. And yet I see a future without you. A future without your haunting presence. A future without your piercing eyes.
— kitkat, Oct 16, 2009
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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 9 months ago

Dear Kitkat...

An enthralling poem this is... Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Gentle regards, Raven.
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 9 months ago

Evil

I caught this poem on the stream, its title caught my attention and I am so glad it did. I do enjoy a good evil poem, with a healthy fear of the darkness held deep within the sub-conscious. Really liked this line: "Your piercing thoughts escape and float around my atmosphere, become my own" Good work my friend, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
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kitkat

16 years 8 months ago

Thanx for the comments. Glad

Thanx for the comments. Glad you liked it. Think you got this one nicely. Thanx for takin the time to comment. :)

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