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kitkat
Oct 16, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Apparition

Those piercing eyes haunt me, follow me, elude me. Your piercing thoughts escape and float around my atmosphere, become my own. In sleepless dreams you follow, a memory of life past, And yet, I am deluded, you did not exist. Where were you discovered? What sacred realm did I summon you from? My subconscious? My desires? My fears? Will I ever send you back? You have become my ghost. My nightmare. My past. And yet I see a future without you. A future without your haunting presence. A future without your piercing eyes.
— kitkat, Oct 16, 2009

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Kitkat...

An enthralling poem this is... Very beautiful. Thank you for sharing it. Gentle regards, Raven.
Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

16 years 7 months ago

Evil

I caught this poem on the stream, its title caught my attention and I am so glad it did. I do enjoy a good evil poem, with a healthy fear of the darkness held deep within the sub-conscious. Really liked this line: "Your piercing thoughts escape and float around my atmosphere, become my own" Good work my friend, HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".
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kitkat

16 years 6 months ago

Thanx for the comments. Glad

Thanx for the comments. Glad you liked it. Think you got this one nicely. Thanx for takin the time to comment. :)