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Oct 16, 2009
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Defragmented Steps
A lovers' childhood lays its nest
By the foundations which are put to rest
By the foundations which are put to rest
Beautiful, Beloved, we in turn state
Among those who have claimed such waste
The world continuously turns to a shade of blue
Having minuscule practice beyond every clue
— Layune, Oct 16, 2009
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doorman
16 years 7 months ago
This is very good. The write
seabhac
16 years 7 months ago
Going from strength to strength Layune