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Bandages On my Soul
Gettysburg shoes, we needed them bad
Whatever we could get, was better than we had
Half of us Killed in three useless tries
"Pickett's Charge" opened up our eyes
Old Jeb Stuart's got some good calvary
But, cut off from, the smarts of General Lee
Meade kept on moving between us and Baltimore
Couldn't up past him, to even up the score
Buford's carbines, can shoot seven times
They was making a mess, of our tired lines
Reynolds came flying, wouldn't let us pass
We got Johnny though, seen it in the glass
Cannons roared, smoke filled the air
Musket-balls fanning through my hair
Men all around me, down in the grip of death
I laid very still, just holding on to breath
I crawled through the lines, almost shot again
I knew the sentry though, it was my brother Ben
I cannot listen to more wounded cries
I will not look with these painful eyes
Upon the wrecks of humanity
Brought about... by you and me
Little red-head Mickey Stave
Saw Benny waiting for a Grave
My brotherhood is all gone
And the Union Army... marches on
Critiques
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Awesome, Gee
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Gee
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
LOL...