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Bandages On my Soul

Gettysburg shoes, we needed them bad

Whatever we could get, was better than we had

Half of us Killed in three useless tries

"Pickett's Charge" opened up our eyes

Old Jeb Stuart's got some good calvary

But, cut off from, the smarts of General Lee

Meade kept on moving between us and Baltimore

Couldn't up past him, to even up the score

Buford's carbines, can shoot seven times

They was making a mess, of our tired lines

Reynolds came flying, wouldn't let us pass

We got Johnny though, seen it in the glass

Cannons roared, smoke filled the air

Musket-balls fanning through my hair

Men all around me, down in the grip of death

I laid very still, just holding on to breath

I crawled through the lines, almost shot again

I knew the sentry though, it was my brother Ben

I cannot listen to more wounded cries

I will not look with these painful eyes

Upon the wrecks of humanity

Brought about... by you and me

Little red-head Mickey Stave

Saw Benny waiting for a Grave

My brotherhood is all gone

And the Union Army... marches on

— Geezer, Oct 15, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Awesome, Gee

I know this is a researched piece, but while reading, I envisioned John Wayne as the narrator. Forgive me , i have a fever at the mo. But, this is really awesome and you have done justice to these men. I loved part 2 as I loved part 1. Very well written. And as before, this is a learning for me. Love to all. Lyz. XX
Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Gee

I dont know how I missed this? I was very tired last night Sir Gee ... so I am sorry I am late .... this one ? in my opinion is one of your best ... the flow is awesome my friend I am loving this war series of yours your showing depths in your writing that is amazing love and higgest bug hugs Jayne x x x x
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

LOL...

Just getting around to my e-mail, and discovered this from you, thank you so much, I am trying to develop the theme of what it does to a person, to go war. What motivates someone to go to war? How does their perspective change once they have been in a war? I am going to explore as many different emotions as I can think of. Boy, maybe if we had been able to send all these hig hug bugs to all sides maybe we wouldn't have had so many wars. Higgest of bugs, and lotsa love, ~ Gee