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Poem: Only Your Adoration

The essence of God is within,
looking to spring forth in your life.
You have been greatly blessed,
but may be unable to recognize it.
Learn to die to selfish desire
and enable His Spirit to be activated.
All that God requests is your adoration.
Giving praise and singing hymns to Yaweh
means He has captured your heart -
Therefore, your love for Him is... Genuine.

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— Joseph J. Breunig 3rd, Oct 15, 2009

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yenti

16 years 6 months ago

Joseph

Your poem seems to bring an advert for your faith, and your belief in the one God Not all poets are of that leaning and looking through the things that happen to them on this Earthly Plain then a lot of them may have lost contact with your God and may in their wanderings away as Jesus did in the wilderness be at a level of peace that they can tolerate. I would love to see some of your writing depicting the Glory of a fallen leaf or some such item that passes by our sight as we may not be able ever to see the greater picture, Yours, In Love and Light, Ian.T