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mugsy
Oct 15, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Garden

The Garden
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The flowers grew
Thickest there,
Where she was buried,
And a pale gray stone
Marks it,
The name worn by many frosts
And years,
Beyond what I recall
I loved her most of all,
In her garden...
 
 

— mugsy, Oct 15, 2009

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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Beautiful words

and poem, just beautiful. Love Lyz. XX
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mugsy

16 years 7 months ago

The Garden

Thanks for the nice words Lyz, if you get this maybe you could tell me the trick to commenting on other people's work. Whenever I do nothing comes through on the authors page. I asked for technical help but all they did was direct me to FAQ's which doesn't cover the problem.----Mugs---
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Hello

okay, I hope I can help. Below the poem there is where you comment, then scroll down and push preview, so you can check if it is okay, scroll down again and push post comment. You dont have to push preview, but I do sometimes. Wait until it comes up then go to right side and click on your friends latest, or Latest work. That should be all that is needed. try, then let me know, okay. Love Lyz. XX
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Hi again

After u comment, then there is a preview button, click on it then wait, you will see your comment, then go down again and there should be a post button, click and wait again until your comment comes up, scroll up and you should see it is under the persons poem. I t has to be there. Otherwise, I am sorry I dont know how to help. Only other suggestion is ask one of the members, Moonman, Cat, Andrew or one of the others. Love Lyz. XX