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Death Love's Final Triumph Over Matter

Death, love's final triumph  over matter
a dreamless sea bereft of singing fowl
 where skating progeny as souls take flight
as tearing limbs merge with wings of light

A mariner's caw the crows tattoo
abreast of salt sea souls consumed
beneath the hungry veil Her vigils keep
in coils of foam the prisoners deep

Sailors in squawking marsh tongues
men of sea, wind and sky
Liliths of air, bone and thigh
enchanted oils and foul rank mud
a misting veil twixt earth and sun





















— Dalton, Oct 15, 2009

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Dalton...

This is an enchanting poem... Beautiful and beautifully done. Love, Raven
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Dalton

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Raven

Thankyou, well yes it just came out one night (i presume one night, thats when I usually do my writing). Have you ever read Dylan Thomas, I'm sure you'd love him. He created a language all hisown. john
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Awesome

Quite a read. Loved it deeply. Vivid in your words. Love Lyz. XX
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 7 months ago

Death's Love

Dalton I am glad to find another who uses words such as I- not often but then some. Twixt and Bereft In of my poem titled Twixt Twilight and Dawn A dreamless sea bereft of singing fowl A misting veil twixt earth and sun just love these lines my friend Electric Blue