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Oct 13, 2009
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Rub Salt in an Open Wound (and You Shall Feel Human)
I am a vacant shell
stationary in the grasps of time
overlooking the significance
in mountains left to climb
I feel nothing, nobody
numb, null and void
tied up in the woven string
of a marionette long destroyed.
I am a hollow mask
forgotten, and cast to one side
I've walked to the edge of the earth
and where I knelt, I've etched a line.
I feel tattered, damaged
frayed, drained and tired
expelling a bleak atmosphere
undeserving of all I've desired.
I am fire, I am water and I am stone
I am oxygen, I am pharmaceuticals and I am smoke
I am alcohol, I am open wounds and I am salt
I am blood, sweat and tears
and I feel human
stationary in the grasps of time
overlooking the significance
in mountains left to climb
I feel nothing, nobody
numb, null and void
tied up in the woven string
of a marionette long destroyed.
I am a hollow mask
forgotten, and cast to one side
I've walked to the edge of the earth
and where I knelt, I've etched a line.
I feel tattered, damaged
frayed, drained and tired
expelling a bleak atmosphere
undeserving of all I've desired.
I am fire, I am water and I am stone
I am oxygen, I am pharmaceuticals and I am smoke
I am alcohol, I am open wounds and I am salt
I am blood, sweat and tears
and I feel human
— Bosscombat, Oct 13, 2009
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lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Wonderful
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
You write...
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
My Darlin Matty I adore this
Race_9togo
16 years 7 months ago
Damn Good,
vinton
16 years 5 months ago
WOW! Thats about all I can