Geezer

Oct 13, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Boarding House Bash

T.V. flickers in dim and quiet room

Killer watches them to sleep

A chosen few, to send to their doom

Ohhhh.... The blood he'll reap

Slinking through the kitchen dark

He picks a real sharp knife

The one he saw walking in the park

Is going from this life

Quietly he slips the blade, deep into the throat

Slices him from ear to ear as he's taking off his coat

He slips in the blood and gore

His hands are drenched with it

Wondering if there are more

He sees the bathroom lit

He finds one soaking in the tub

Working on his beardly stubs

Tosses a live hair-dryer in

Deadly... like a big shark fin

Watching him convulse and shake

Looking like some shake and bake

Steam rising from bubble and boil

Took him away from his beardly toil

Another girl starts to scream, he squeezes out her breath

Her face contorted with bug-eyed fright

She fights the arms that squeeze so tight

Turning blue in the throes of death

Off to the kitchen...Something to eat?

There is someone cooking there

Stabs her through, nice and neat

The pretty one, with long dark hair

Takes a piece of her breast-meat now

Wants it cooked...baked or how?

Salt and pepper just to taste

Find a spoon, gonna baste

Finished eating...Watch some T.V.

Wish I had someone to watch with me

Be nice just to sit awhile

We could watch Forensic Files

The dawn is here, he's got to go

Don't say good-bye, I hear him pout

I had a real nice time, you know

I'll just see my-ownself out.

— Geezer, Oct 13, 2009

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Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe, Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Shakespeare, and many of the poets here at Neopoet.

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Critiques

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Gee

OoOOOoOoOO Gee ... Killer is getting very daring is he ever going to have any close calls with the police ... I reckon this ones awesome ;) best killer so far, and I am getting so used to him I only have to cover my eyes half way through ;) hahaha great work as par the normal for our killer extraordinaire LOL love and higgest hug bugs Jayne x x x x

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Chasing Killer

I just posted so that I wouldn't lose it, I have a few more tweaks. I'm so glad you are getting used to Killer, it looks like he is going to be around awhile. I have tweaked once, maybe will one more time before final draft, but thank you for the vote. How is the pic of your Hug-bug coming? Can't wait to see. Buckets of love for the higgest love bugs. ~ Gee

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Just got a bit of wind in my

Just got a bit of wind in my sails tonight Gee so I posted a poem and I am off to Animate some bugs ;) hahaha love and higgest bug hugs of love Jayne (huggles)

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

This one was,

a bit jovial. lol. Still on a grand scale, but a wee bit funny. My son reckons adult comic or a book but there would have to be some cop or someone on his tail, Killer being, just that one step ahead each time. He enjoyed the read. If I was a publisher, I would get Killer on the run, so to speak. lol. Well, I could rave about him forever. I am not vicious, just like a bit of gore, sort of, horror first, but look at Saw, it is still bloody going, lol. Excellent, But I think you know I am already hooked. Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Killer's on the run...

I agree, that it could be an adult comic book. And to have him one step ahead of the cops would be just the thing. Like I said to Seren, I already tweaked once, and may do so again, I just posted so that I wouldn't lose it. I have had problems, in the past with leaving it half done on diminish, while I leave to do an errand. My comp. decides to re-boot and I lose whatever I was working on. I am so glad he hasn't lost his touch. I was worried about him. Hooked! That may be something to look into. Maybe he could go on one of those reality shows like the crab- fishers or something. Stay tuned! Hig hug bugs forever!~ Gee

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Had to reply,lol.

and take just one more peek. You have trouble too, I hate this old thing, always slow and goes of itself at times, lol. Glad Killer is not alone too much, he might snap, lol. I agree, hooked. Arrgh. Oh and what the hell is the reality show, Crab Fishers,? lol. Im from Oz don't forget, and no, not the prison show Oz, Lol. Love to all from Lyz.,XX Goodnight all. X

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

I believe...

The real name of the show is 'Deadliest Catch' a reality show that tags along on the boats of Alaskan King Crab fishermen in the Bering strait. It is on The Discovery channel. Sleep... Killer will watch over you, heh heh heh... Hig bugs, ~ Gee

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks for letting me know,

I have not seen this one, but we have a similar show. Not sure of name, could be the same?, I think it is finished though. Oh well, I slept well, for a change and I think Killer bypassed me because he wanted to see my eyes turn red when he does the deed, and as I was in such a deep sleep and nothing could wake me, he must of felt that I was a waste of his talented time, lol, thank goodness, lol. Love Lyz. XX

Candlewitch

16 years 7 months ago

Hi Gee

Killer makes for great entertainment! He sounds like he has gone from amateur to pro. It is a good thing that he enjoys his work. Both Edge and I enjoyed this gruesome write. Our favorite lines are: He finds one soaking in the tub Working on his beardly stubs Tosses a live hair-dryer in Deadly… like a big shark fin Watching him convulse and shake Looking like some shake and bake Steam rising from bubble and boil Took him away from his beardly toil Thanks for the fun read Always, Cat

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

Killer liked that one too...

He loves to play in the bath, and the hot water just eases those taut muscles, and soothes the nagging head-aches. He's been working up to the levels expected, and soon, I think will surpass himself. He sends Hig bugs, yours too, ~ Gee

hardcorechick28

16 years 7 months ago

have mercy.....

the hair dryer in the tub rocked!!!! Electricution is always something to watch. I love Killer, a man after my own heart, but he seems awful lonley. Still needs a companion. I know of a Vampire Tramp who is for hire. She has been on a little hiadus and is growing tired of Deacon and his infidelity. Talk to you soon.....