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Twilight Slumber

My mind felt "cross-eyed" underneath the fongu kush
so sleep rushed ever closer, towards my mind,
as I waited, the evening slowly waned away
and a preview takes it's hold, only to be kind.

Twilight slumber is a very special time
where crests of reality and dreamland often blur,
then people seem to multiply before your eyes
and anything one can imagine, can occur.

Sometimes you'll feel confused inside it's grip
and fear itself will come along to hold your hand,
what you permit yourself not, to remember
is just as well, because you'd never understand.

I met a blind man walking backwards, in my travels
who felt not happiness, nor neither was he grieving,
when I asked him why he did this, so
he said, "Because it always looks as though I'm leaving !"

Two talking felines suddenly appeared
who spoke of eating pretty much, 'round the clock...
they told of how quite easily it could be done
if the pantry host, would forget to lock the lock.

I then swam towards the surface of my dream
and learned a valued lesson to my head,
when a journey beckons, take time to pack a lunch
and always look the same direction that you tread !
— docmaverick, Oct 13, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Critiques

Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dearest Doc

I loved this whimsical dream ... I smiled the whole time I read it ... made me think of twin peaks, dont ask me ,Its reminding me a little of the dream sequence when the midget is doing weird stuff lol love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 7 months ago

Jayne....

...don't be too short with that midget; he's probably a Piscese...a butler, maybe even working for "scale". To top it off, he's probably in-between paychecks....and THAT'S why he's really, a little "short"...@ the moment. Seriously Jayne, thanks for the kind remarks. "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

And what a peruse

Loved this twilight slumber dream. I loved all the different sequences to your dream write, well written. Thanks, Love to you and yours, Doc. Love Lyz. xx
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 7 months ago

Thanks Lyz....

...I appreciate that. "Perusals", are what we make of them. You always touch me with your comments, and so...I salute you ! Thanks, again.....seriously ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 7 months ago

your twilight dream....

dream on...Doc..for as you dream, you feel no pain...a mixed up mix but I liked the write...