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Bonitaj
Bonitaj
Oct 12, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ROAD RAGE

 Ashen whitethe protruding knuckles,simian claspsgrip rigid wheels - heart pounding-pulse racing-teeth clenched-mind incensed ROAD RAGE... It's another bumper to bumperdump trucker SCREECH!"Watch out!" sucker-lights flashing-minds crashing -finger showing-mind blowing ROAD RAGE... eyes gloweringspeed empowering - not
-recrimination-suffocation-altercation  just
breath takingdeath making ROAD RAGE....  BjR  12 Oct., '09 
— Bonitaj, Oct 12, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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Seren

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Dear Boni

OOoOoOoo Boni I hear ya ... Cept the bastards took my licence because of my health so no drivey drivey for me for a while lol loved this one huni ....one thing hun the gap in between the lines was distracting for me, could be me I just surfaced from bed after two days and the world looks weird to me lol but A great bit of road rage love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 7 months ago

Thank you Jayne!

I agree about the formatting... unfortunately another google problem,,, THanks for stopping by! Boni
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Ink Dragon

16 years 7 months ago

Boni,

breakneck pacing, just like those drivers who think they are in a formula 1 race! I had to laugh, I've often been so furious (and, admittedly, shaken) in situations like these (bumper to bumper, frantic clicking of the lights and indicators behind me, and I want to turn around and yell: "You f***ing idiot, it's not me, it's that granny IN FRONT OF ME. I cannot drive THROUGH her!"). Do you know the Omid Djalili sketch about road rage? I think it can be found on youtube, do watch it if you get a chance! Yours, ~Nina