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early spatterings

Tender soft is the downy blush
Himalayan poppies extend,
petals pouting expectantly
for warmth to flood them,
melting them to open
full red passioned lips
to their kissing sun.

Softly fall rains early drops
to spread silvered edges where they land
drifted by a gentle breeze
of teasing early spatterings
from the grey humpbacked whale of weather
moving slowly in the south.

Ripples push north beyond this valley,
stirring springs' fresh green leaves of hazel
unfurling scents conveyed as maypole ribbons
that dance a red pup by its nose
upon the green before the blue retreats.

Safety just a short dash to home
where chewed cushions
and bare springs exposed
hold more comfort in a mattress
than the padding ever did.

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Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 6 months ago

I followed every

beautiful word, such a wonderful description of early spring (one that may never actually show it's face). Loved it!! :)fleur
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Craig Norris

16 years 6 months ago

thank you fluer

I am happy that you enjoyed this one, yes that's the worry I guess, we will jump from this cold wet tail end of winter straight into a full blown summer, and all the growth that's standing in the paddocks will dry off and turn to summers tinder. Craig