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Oct 12, 2009
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Gizelle
In a white light
of organza glow
they come to me.
I see no face,
they wont reveal,
who can they be?.
I feel no fear,
only the peace
they radiate.
And the room,
becomes brighter
as they illuminate.
I can feel
their hands
upon my bed.
Their voices,
whispering,
in my head.
An unusual dialect
I've never heard.
Quite unknown.
But I feel
a seed has
been sown.
What message
have they
implanted.
Or is it,
magic that
they've granted.
The room dims,
as the unknown
whispers finish.
And they,
in the light,
diminish.
Eyes heavy,
as sleep
takes hold.
Deep the slumber,
in my dreams,
memories unfold.
I have a purpose,
a quest they
demand.
I am to obey
this whispered
command.
I am Gizelle,
water nymph
of the sea .
I am here to
set the
dolphins free.
of organza glow
they come to me.
I see no face,
they wont reveal,
who can they be?.
I feel no fear,
only the peace
they radiate.
And the room,
becomes brighter
as they illuminate.
I can feel
their hands
upon my bed.
Their voices,
whispering,
in my head.
An unusual dialect
I've never heard.
Quite unknown.
But I feel
a seed has
been sown.
What message
have they
implanted.
Or is it,
magic that
they've granted.
The room dims,
as the unknown
whispers finish.
And they,
in the light,
diminish.
Eyes heavy,
as sleep
takes hold.
Deep the slumber,
in my dreams,
memories unfold.
I have a purpose,
a quest they
demand.
I am to obey
this whispered
command.
I am Gizelle,
water nymph
of the sea .
I am here to
set the
dolphins free.
— lyz, Oct 12, 2009
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Critiques
hugo la rosa
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz:
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Hugo
greeneyes
16 years 8 months ago
My Hero
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Glad you are back
Wafi
16 years 8 months ago
A Lovely Write, Lyz
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hey dear man Wafi
Stuart Reiss
16 years 8 months ago
Wow Liz
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Hi again
t. reflexion
16 years 8 months ago
Oganza Glow
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Thank you
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Lyz
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Cat
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hello dear girl
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dearest Lyz, Just jumped up
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hello Aunty Jayne
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Heya Nana ;)
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
You poor dear,
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 7 months ago
the interest was kep alive
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Shan
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
I thought...
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Yes I agree Dear Gee
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
Definately enchanting
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
WooHoo
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Back again
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
Yes, It is
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Ken
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
I would appropriate any you
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hey, What r u doin up, lol.
Idlemindwondering
16 years 7 months ago
up? it is only about 8
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hi
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Lyz
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Hey
Stuart Reiss
16 years 7 months ago
I love this poem…..Well
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you
alanna_91
16 years 7 months ago
Beautiful words
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Alanna
Wafi
16 years 7 months ago
Wow
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Thank you Dear heart
ziggy
16 years 7 months ago
enda, patrick
lyz
16 years 7 months ago
Thanx Zig
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
freeing dolphins
lyz
16 years 3 months ago
Hello dear friend