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Smile Dual Language [SOMEONE 's SMILY POEM REPHRASED]EDIT
Smile Dual Language
Creativity in poetry
Your bewitching smile has wounded thousands
You cannot kill a simple bird with a small bullet
My friend it’s all in a smile that’s all
Give me a smile
Your lover is present here
So that your smile wounds me...
Then smile once more
Oh! Angel
Give me such a smile
That brings me
back to life once again...
THIS IS THE ORIGINAL VERSION OF THAT POET
Smile Dual Language A creativity in poetry
Your bewitching smile has wounded thousands
Teri ek smile ne hazaron ko ghayal kar diya
Ek goli se to ek parinda bhi nahin Marta
You cannot kill a simple bird with a small bullet
Eh dost smile toe subh kuch hai
My friend its all in a smile thats all
Ek Smile dede
Give me a smile
Musafir Hazir Hai
Your traveller is present here
Is tarah smile phainko
Give me a smile in such a way,
Ki mai ghayal honjaoon
That your smile wounds me
Fir Teri smile se
Then smile once more
Eh farishte
Oh angel
Hosh mein aaoon
Give me a smile
That brings me
back to life once again...
Critiques
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello
loved
16 years 2 months ago
smile