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Smile Dual Language [SOMEONE 's SMILY POEM REPHRASED]EDIT

Smile Dual Language


Creativity in poetry

 

Your bewitching smile has wounded thousands

 

You cannot kill a simple bird with a small bullet

 

My friend it’s all in a smile that’s all

 

Give me a smile

 

Your lover  is present here

 

So that your smile wounds me...

 

Then smile once more

 

Oh! Angel

 

Give me  such a smile

 

That brings me
back to life once again...


THIS IS THE ORIGINAL VERSION  OF THAT POET

Smile  Dual Language A creativity  in poetry

 

Your bewitching smile has wounded thousands

Teri ek smile ne hazaron ko ghayal kar diya

 

Ek goli se to ek parinda bhi nahin Marta

You cannot kill a simple bird with a small bullet

 

Eh dost smile toe subh kuch hai

My friend its all in a smile thats all

 

Ek Smile dede

Give me a smile

 

Musafir Hazir Hai

Your traveller is present here

 

Is tarah smile phainko

Give me a smile in such a way,

 

Ki mai ghayal honjaoon

That your smile wounds me

 

Fir Teri smile se

Then smile once more

 

Eh farishte

Oh angel

 

Hosh mein aaoon

Give me a smile

 

That brings me
back to life once again...






 

— loved, Oct 11, 2009

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

hello

I was just wondering what was the second language in this piece? I like these lines best: Give me a smile That brings me to life once more Always, Cat
loved

loved

16 years 2 months ago

smile

I am sorry for the delay There is no system here To know When someone has commented I write in gross And so when I feel like I review hence Ur comment. I wonder if u will ever come to know Of my reply now That’s why I am also sending an msg For you thanks Loved Rgds