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Oct 11, 2009
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Swimming in this skin
When the sun on my skin, brings me joyous laughter
There is such a sense of wistful “happy ever after”
And my dearest ones, let’s go down to the water
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
Under here, beneath my skin I feel a river of my history
Why this place, this time, this face will always be a mystery
You know immersion here has always been a gift to me
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
I’ll feel better in the water
Days stretch out and night is shorter
You are tattooed on my heart
My skin is the translucent part
See the beating clockwork here inside
Nothing here that I would want to hide
Let
me
go
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
He may well forsake you, a siren silenced still
I believe that given time, you might escape his will
Until then, look for kinder hearts that bloom and flow and spill
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
Kiss me Evening, take my heart, I’m so willing to give in
I’m finding this human skin such an awful state to live in
Blistered fingers, caved in dreams, yet I can't help forgiving
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
In this place I feel abandoned, yet we’re all contained
Sing me siren songs and dances, I will be sustained
Clouds were angels always for me, even if it rained
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
There is such a sense of wistful “happy ever after”
And my dearest ones, let’s go down to the water
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
Under here, beneath my skin I feel a river of my history
Why this place, this time, this face will always be a mystery
You know immersion here has always been a gift to me
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
I’ll feel better in the water
Days stretch out and night is shorter
You are tattooed on my heart
My skin is the translucent part
See the beating clockwork here inside
Nothing here that I would want to hide
Let
me
go
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
He may well forsake you, a siren silenced still
I believe that given time, you might escape his will
Until then, look for kinder hearts that bloom and flow and spill
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
Kiss me Evening, take my heart, I’m so willing to give in
I’m finding this human skin such an awful state to live in
Blistered fingers, caved in dreams, yet I can't help forgiving
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
In this place I feel abandoned, yet we’re all contained
Sing me siren songs and dances, I will be sustained
Clouds were angels always for me, even if it rained
Swimming like a mermaid in the sun
Toss the worries of our hearts up and turn them into fun
— Cloudthings, Oct 11, 2009
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Critiques
Nordic cloud
16 years 8 months ago
We see, we hear, we feel it all, dear Anni.
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
you would be right there too, I just know it... how carefree & j
Nordic cloud
16 years 7 months ago
How could they be anything but loveable
Candlewitch
16 years 8 months ago
hello
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
I will be back to pop this into poetry form as opposed to song
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
asking evening to kiss me, it kind of merrits a persona & capita
Kailashana
16 years 8 months ago
I’d love to hear it Anni.
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
your siren song is a potent poetry that often takes us under dea
Geezer
16 years 7 months ago
Love the Siren song...
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
glad you were able to visit the shores of siren sung wonder & me
Worldwide Freeride
16 years 7 months ago
Sing a song of praises...
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Dale, you are always so encouraging, thank you
Bullion Grey
16 years 7 months ago
hey there!
Cloudthings
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks BG I am scrambling to catch up here with little time for
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 7 months ago
Kiss me Evening, take my heart
Dalton
16 years 7 months ago
Swimming In This Skin