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Raven's Rhapsody

Said Raven to the Wolf
As he passed under
The old Acacia tree
Did you think
You could escape me?

Wolf looked up
Through blood stained eyes
Gnashed his teeth and growled
Foolish bird
Tell me what it is
 You think you know

Raven grinned
And continued his rant
I am the mirrored reflection
Of your tortured soul
I am what you wish you were
But can't

Wolf responded
In a hellish voice
If I could only get up this tree
I would teach you
There is no one just like me

Raven laughed rudely
And then pressed on
I am the violence
That drives every battle
You fight
I am the she-wolf
Who does you in the night

I am every sin
You committed
Everything you ever hated
I AM the messenger
To bid you warning
Your time is coming

Wolf howled
Every hair up on his neck
Demon bird
From hell's firey gate
It will be a cold day
When you decide my fate

Raven ignored him
And chattered still
I am the knowledge
I am the strength
I am your greatest song
But not your masterpiece

Wolf seethed
As he spoke
Spare me your wisdom
Spare me your taunts
It is life that made me
It is life that shaped me
Not some loud mouth
Feathered haunt

Raven nodded
You make a point
So for now I'll take my leave
But not forever, you see
My departure is only temporary

I am death, black as my wings
I am the inevitable end
However it may come
I will be back
When your time is up
I will come for you
Once and for all
Little, lost pup

And with that
He flew away
Leaving Wolf to wonder
He beat it this time, however

Death has no time line
It has no favorites
It just sits and waits
Catches you off guard
When will it be your turn
To face your eternal doom
Hell only knows

— hardcorechick28, Oct 11, 2009

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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

thank you so much

I am glad you liked it...i am finding that over time my poetry is improving. I try different things from time to time and see what works. Thank you again...
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 8 months ago

=0)

I love the title and the theme. simply fascinating... My favorite lines are: Raven laughed rudely And then pressed on I am the violence That drives every battle You fight I am the she-wolf Who does you in the night Always, Cat
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hardcorechick28

16 years 8 months ago

glad you liked it....

I am fascinated with Ravens...I think they are so beautiful..despite their negative meaning. Glad to see this one was a hit.
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 7 months ago

I did comment, but for some

I did comment, but for some reason, it didn't show up. I think maybe that I didn't hit post before I logged out. Sorry! I loved the interchange between the raven and the wolf. Raven presents himself well, and the wolf is properly outraged at the termity of this haughty bird! The raven reasserts himself with the final word, before bowing out with the promise of his prophesy. Well done! You have written a great poem! ~ Gee
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hardcorechick28

16 years 7 months ago

ravens

are my favorite bird as wolves are my favorite wild animal (cat being my favorite domestic). I thought the two complimented the other nicely. I am looking to work the raven into some more of my dark poetry....since he is such a sarcastic fellow....glad you enjoyed.