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Cuchulainn and the Rose:

Cuchulainn holds a forest within a forest in his mind
A centuries old vision of a rose withered by time
She came down from yon green garden
yon green garden in the mists
she came down from yon green garden
by the orchard neath the liss
And she wept: "Beloved poet, o loved poet of the north,
Come you back to raise my song to all my children neath the sword
Come you back to keep your bond to cleanse your blade
By yon green ford
Come you back to keep your bond to cleanse your blade
By yon green ford

I am come to cleanse your wounds
Which are my wounds beloved witch
I am come beloved Erin not with a sword
But with a wish that my children
Yet thy children may receive no less than this
That my children yet thy children
May know freedom from this ancient trick

The rose you hold so sacred to yon breast beloved witch
The rose you hold which now as then united by a kiss
Maybe the rose that now as then unites us neath
A common sky and not the blooded, thorned rose
Raped by tyranny and lies. . .











— Dalton, Oct 10, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 8 months ago

Hello Dalton

You are indeed, a gifted storeyteller-poet. I feel like I'm traveling with you; through one of those enchanted forests in Wales (or Scotland or Ireland or some other Magic Woods). I am a lover of Celtic and Gallic beliefs; myth. Mythology holds a special place in my life. I imagine being in the fine company of Taliesin the Bard... listening to his magic storeytelling and poems. That would be sublime, indeed! This poem is beautiful... Raven PS I like the words "ancient trick". To me they fit quite well. Besides... I like those words; they sound like a poem, on their own.
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Dalton

16 years 8 months ago

A word from Dalton

Thankyou very much for your response to my poetry. To hear the ideas of other poets is why I signed up for neopoet in the first place. And so far I've had a pretty positive response, more than I could have imagined. I loved your words because that was bang on the effect I was hoping to get. To create a direct bridge into the dream land, which is a vision of the otherworld held so sacred to many cultures. Thankyou again for reading my poem I will definitely be taking a gander at some of yours. Love DaltonX
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 8 months ago

We step into yon green

We step into yon green hilled history, stories of yore to dwell in mossed grottoes and wait there spellbound as the spiders weave their webs and catch the music of long ago into the loomed weave of our modern brash noisy society and sooth its troubled brow, give solace to our wounded spirits and courage to our valour and I for one, love to wander in these green bindweed hung groves of yours "yon green garden, " where the paintings of the Pre-Raphaelite artists, Rosetti and Burn Jones those the medieval revivalists can be relived, perhaps you will begin another movement in that genre and give its mysterious, evocative, diaphanous creations a new screen to dance upon? From an old dame whose father was born in 1898 Ann of the north, Norway.
greeneyes

greeneyes

16 years 8 months ago

wow

I do not know what else to say but that this is just beautiful! You are a true talent! love greeneyes
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lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Just Right

I enjoyed this very much, all that I have read this morn has been amazing and I think this is as well. Love to you and yours from Lyz. XX