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Oct 10, 2009
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Hope in the Clouds(Edit)
Peeking through clouds
watching earth move,
from way up here
it looks real smooth
Those little specks
that move on the ground,
are wandering madly
all about town
A sudden explosion
takes my surprise,
pulling the clouds back
I look through the skies
Seeing the earth
on fire and destroyed,
maybe they'll learn
once all missiles deploy
Fighting goes on
across a worlds face,
and they wonder?
why man looses faith
I worry for worlds
that I'll never see,
hoping my grand-kids
will grow and be free
So I do my small bit
in word and in life,
hoping for something
to shed a new light
And once all is done
with nothing left to do,
I'll kick up my heals
and dream and hope too
— Seren, Oct 10, 2009
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Hooded Stranger
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Angelic
Seren
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Dear HS
Geezer
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You have quite...
Seren
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Dearest Gee
Wafi
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Hope In The Clouds
Seren
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Dearest Wafi
lyz
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Wonderful write dear Jayne
Seren
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Dearest Lyz
themoonman
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Jayne...
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Dear Richard
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Dear Jayne:
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Dear Hugo
Electric Blue
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hope
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