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Destination: Anywhere

I spy her in my peripheral

Laughing

Transmitting a florescent smile

This asphalt path,

Cut through solid rock. 

Circling mountains,

Cascading over water

Burnt through the serrated bush…

It’s our path to the indefinite

We drift equally for an instant

Each pondering the others intention

A fleeting glimpse into each others lives

Each others eyes.

Until the white undulation quivers

It destroys her focus,

Though she’s had enough

She’s given up,

Floating too close to the edge.

I give a silent snigger

Diverting, deflecting my attention

This asphalt path,

Winding through hills

Relating insignificant towns

Intertwining,

Interlocking upon itself

Enabling exuberant voyage

The sun,

Merciless inferno in the sky

Barer of life on earth

Extends its benevolent rays

Coating all in sight with colour

Reds,

Greens,

Blues,

Whites,

All shoot past my glass confines 

The never-ending circuitry

The ever-expanding course

Forced upon the landscape

To satisfy our growth

This asphalt path I’ve grown to love

It provides me many effects

Drifting along this hardened trail

Bequeaths me yet a different outlet

— Bosscombat, Oct 10, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dearest Matty

You would not believe the memory that resurfaced reading this one .... will tell you on wednesday when I see you lol ..... the roads we travel in life often have effects on how we view the world ..... I loved this journey ... wonderful write I cannot see anything to fault but I am tired darlin will be back later and have another look over it ... but I think its damn good :) Love and higgest bugs Jayne x x x x
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

its the fuckin road my friend, its the only road i know. *sings* thought u may have liked this jayknee 2bums. <3 ♣
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 8 months ago

Yep

this one is definately an awesome work, well actually it's fucking brilliant!!! :)fleur
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

fleur your too kind :) thanks glad you liked it ♣
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Boss

This is electrifying and an energizing play on words, I would hate to literally walk this asphalt path your mind travels. Lol. I enjoyed this cleverly worded write. Love Lyz. XX
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Bosscombat

16 years 8 months ago

:)

sure you would lyz... its just the freeway :P you dont have to walk.. you can drive or ride if ya had to walk id hate it too but nah its cruisy :P bands on tour and all is well. ♣
Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

I recognise...

that stretch of road! Do you also look at the windows of houses as you pass them by? I do, and sometimes I catch a glimpse of something on the wall or a tv or maybe even a person, and wonder what their life is like. An awesome look at the highway of life my friend! Just one thing. Did you mean bare as in nude? [Gotta stop looking in those windows I guess.] LOL Or bear as in borne a load? It works either way. Just curious. ~ Gee
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Justice

16 years 7 months ago

Beautiful

We drift equally for an instant Each pondering the others intention A fleeting glimpse into each others lives Each others eyes.... I know that game.