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Oct 09, 2009
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Rejuvenated
Rejuvenated
Once more my love
You seem to be
in a quandary
Why to do you appear
to be so dazed?
you seem to be worried
Each hour
Each moment
Tell me
What can be done
To assure you
As always.
I have for ever contributed my best
I know to that
you now too also confess
but the whirling’s in your mind
I find are changing,
fast,
Every time
Your worry is my gravest concern
This fact I hope you do discern
My love come back
To your original strain
Surely you will soon be
like before
once again...
— loved, Oct 09, 2009
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lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Lovely
loved
16 years 8 months ago
thanks
weirdelf
16 years 2 months ago
A shared intimacy, well written
loved
16 years 2 months ago
Thank u very much
loved
16 years 2 months ago
Thank u very much
loved
15 years 11 months ago
i am looking forward to your considered comment and view
Ladderwords
16 years 2 months ago
I agree with Jess about the
loved
16 years 2 months ago
thanks
judyanne
16 years 2 months ago
really lovely loved
loved
16 years 2 months ago
grateful thanks
Ladderwords
16 years 2 months ago
Love the edits!
loved
16 years ago
so many EDITS
loved
16 years ago
thanks