Darkest night

I loved this poem you set the mood just right and with anticipation I wanted to get out of there with you well done my friend ... this is just wonderful I am in love with the night :) .... Love and hugz Jayne x x x

Before I comment, typo, 2nd line, capital I, and 2nd stanza so it flows, capital I again and, through an uneasy feeling, I think-an- lets it flow better, one more thing, my eyes swayed too much, bring your words over a little more. Now, I am impressed with this poem. It really is vivid, I can picture some one walking under a streetlamp at night and looking over their shoulder, little unnerving, lol, but in your eerie words, something nocturnal. ouch. No way would I walk through any thickets, bushes or such. I love scary but I wont be in the middle of it, those days are long gone. I really enjoyed reading this and it is marvelous. Your title is fine. Love lyz. XX

I liked the way your words were, they were just too far over. In a rush, tisk, tisk, lol. Love to all, hurry get your PC. Love Lyz. XX

This is brilliant! favorite lines are: Silence broken by the hum of life Shadows fail on every side of me as i blindly clamber through uneasy feelings of being watched by nocturnal nature having wandered from what i know . I love a good scary tale! Always, Cat

not sure how I missed this rather clever masterpiece. I love the imagery in this one and the being lost in the darkness can have several meanings...nice touch! Good piece my friend. HS ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "With all that I am and all that I could be, I walk this earth and yet nobody sees me".