Sunset Renewed

To smell the rain on hallowed ground
To see the wonder of sunset found

To dance the joy of future come
To catch the day and savour one

To smell the skin of my brand new boy
To love and live my fathers joy

I am found

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Country/Region: AUS

Comments

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 7 months ago

Yes, you made it!!

awesome write, short and sweet, keep them coming!! :)fleur

Stuart Reiss

16 years 7 months ago

Gratitude comes by the truckload

Fleur, I cannot thank you enough for introducing me to the mindblowingly fantastic site of like minded individuals and there soulful work. It is beyond belief and I love it Thankyou Very best regards Stuart

Kailashana

16 years 7 months ago

Indeed. Lovely avatar,

Indeed. Lovely avatar, lovely poem. Lost and found in a child's eye. ~A

Seren

16 years 7 months ago

Beautifully done Stuart …

Beautifully done Stuart ... got a great mix of self in this one ... I enjoyed this short write immensely I believe we have a friend in commen lol Missy Fleur up there ... welcome to Neopoet and lovely to meet you ... Kind regards Jayne :) Edit bad bad typo had to fix, please xcuse my fubar lol

Stuart Reiss

16 years 7 months ago

Good to be here!

Thanks Jayne, Thats great! I think it's a sweet little offer... I had a great chat with Fleur the other night. Seems there's something special at work here and I'm just happy to have found it...(with help lol) Regards Stuart

lyz

16 years 7 months ago

Love the Pic

And loved this poem. It maybe short but quite a joy to read. Love to you and yours. Lyz. xx