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THE INVISIBLE HOOK

 It's pure steel and iceand as cold as your heart I can touch it daily although we're miles apart .   The invisible hook  -
 it's the one I eschew - but
it's pierced through my heart
and  locked into you.
 
Forgive my frustration
my saddness and shame
it's the addiction to destruction
that takes me down again.
 
The Buddists knew best
of the pain we all keep -
the ones we drag with us
that drug us to sleep.
 
There's no absolution
from a tear-filled life -
there's no seeking pardon
by plunging the knife...  BjR  October 7, '09
— Bonitaj, Oct 07, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: Tip of Southern Africa, ZAF

Favorite Poets: Too many to narrow down, but briefly :, AUDEN, T.S. ELIOT, DICKENSON, RILKE, THOREAU, RUMI ... the list is endless. Am inspired by many, especially those that live lives of "quiet desperation, and go to the grave with a song still in them" (THoreau)

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Seren

Seren

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Boni

Sorry but I have to agree with kal ? wheres the rest ... this sounded like a prelude or introduction to a bigger story ... the knife made it interesting at the end made me feel like I needed to know more about this story ... wonderful write though I adored it ... Love Jayne x x x
Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 8 months ago

How we play

out the sagas of our lives on this website... There is indeed more - an earlier chapter! If you go back and read ODE TO A YOGI FLYER 1st - which was given to someone - then this is the apology that followed. The knife was a direct reference to a lashing out, a stab in the back! Thanks for stopping by! Boni
Michael Anthony

Michael Anthony

16 years 8 months ago

Awaiting

... the completion of the triptych. Like Kal and Jayne, I hope there is more B! Really liked the first line and first stanza. This didn't feel like an apology to me, but maybe more is to be revealed??? Best Mike