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My Palace and my servants

My Palace and my Servants

 

My palace is too beautiful  to stay and

my servants are too loyal to me

They have enormous powers to do anything

I t is in my hands to keep them all good

They  make me as a too rich  or poor in a second

It is in my option and in my efforts

They are too cruel and worst

When they are in the hands of scoundrels

I admire them in all along their way and

I guide them to the Temple of Love with peace

They made my hut as a palace of glory

I am always grateful to them for their service

They are true and sincere

as long as my path is in truth and  Peace

They can bring God to this earth and

they can speak with Him as angels

Yes They are powerful  and wise

they can take decisions at any critical moment

They are my thoughts and my Palace is my mind

everyone is having in this world

— SAKTHEEE2007, Oct 07, 2009

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Geezer

Geezer

16 years 8 months ago

Your thoughts can...

Serve you well. You just have control and think for yourself, not let others think for you. I think you get that, which is why you wrote this. Very good work Steven. I think you meant to say make instead of [take] in line 5. You should get rid of the last line:"everyone is having in this world" It doesn't fit. I know you mean to say that everybody feels like this, but you didn't connect it with the line just before it, or continue it on it's own. Yours always, ~ Gee