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theladyblue
theladyblue
Oct 07, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

strange little flower...

I have come here to die…
in the clutches of crystal and water?
set out for display like…
your common flower?

I am not the same as my sisters
I am new and still
you trim my innocence
strip my defenses
so that you are not so easily pricked…

I am here…can you see…
can you understand ?
that while they hang their heads to die…
I proudly hold mine up and reach for the sky…
they are beautiful though aren’t they…
in their destruction…

kill me softly please…
take me out and in the moonlight
bathe your body in my scent…
trace the delicacies of you with my soft curves…
place me between your legs
I will spread forth
and cover your love in crimson death…
— theladyblue, Oct 07, 2009

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theladyblue

theladyblue

16 years 8 months ago

hmm...

what to you use what to use...i stumbled on the same spot...ill let it stew...perhaps i should go to bed now...i feel like i am floating LOL... thanks for the read chica! <3 Emarie __________________________________________________________________________________ "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Great Write

A strange little flower alright. This was a very sensual poem, one that I enjoyed. Thank you, Love from Lyz. Xx
Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 8 months ago

Beautiful...

I love your poem... So very graceful and elegant... Exquisite. Raven
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orgami

16 years 8 months ago

Strange little flower

your poetry is blooming also this is a dazzler to me for sure must be my reading poetry books about poets or this time of year I agree with these other fine poets!!!! or maybe this strange little poem its something though!!!
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 7 months ago

Oh little blue flower.

Oh Lady (smock) Blue, worthy of the loving You flower, you flower here in such sensitivity, the shy yet bold one of the many flowers around you, the one that dared to raise its head and die in bliss intead of missing the great drama, this. So beautifu, so delicate, yes I like this. Love Ann of Norway.
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 6 months ago

Strange little Flower

E Marie This is me. Lost in the dizziness of the fragrance of the flowers I am that one bloom waiting still proud to be a part of. So sensouious delicate each petal silky soft so precious are we. Beautiful creations such visions you invoke always Electric Blue