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A defining biopsy

I have often ,  thought about
Streets  displaying
A dead-end
No outlet
This road is ending
Use caution , be careful read this sign 

A motion continuing
Is a motion turning
Oblivious to caution .
Closure is submersing
All the practicality

Your destination
A defining biopsy
As you continued , turning 
 On to this street

A concluding  diagnostic
Dead -end
No outlet
This road is ending
Didn’t you read ?

A hard head will make a ego weak
As you think back , to all the love ones  with
No outlet
This road is ending
Didn’t you read ?

Missing the ending of each
Chapter of love
But a turn  around to humbleness
May complete your resolve

Directions are  clear
Listen to what you hear
Read the signs of truthfulness



— press, Oct 07, 2009

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themoonman

themoonman

16 years 8 months ago

Press...

I am in complete agreement with Theo on this poem... great write! loved the metaphor, for life is indeed a road of choices... and there are always signs, when we are young many go unheeded and after a while, we learn to watch for, read, with the caution of having been there. Richard
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lyz

16 years 8 months ago

Dear Press

All has been said in the 2 above comments, so I will tell you that you have written a great piece here and well done. Love to you and yours from lyz. xx
press

press

16 years 8 months ago

Thanks Richard , Kal , Lyz.& Annie

I love all you guys . This is my spot light ? when my friends read my poetry . I had to take some time off to redirect [ I am condemned to push forward my limits of poetry] like I said I have made friends with this word, and it feels good LOV2U PRESS