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Oct 06, 2009
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An Omnipotent Friend
It's another day for many
however, for a select few;
it's a time to deal with heartaches
and to figure out, "What to do?"
Every time this happens
it violates more and more,
and the question asked is, "Why would God...
..allow this, and whatever for?"
God isn't who caused all of this distress
or all individual calamaties,
it's because Adam and Eve picked the fruit
off of one, and not the other trees.
Fire season in California
is overwhelming, to say the least.
Adam and Eve allowed disasters to happen
when they first unleashed the "beast".
I believe my God truly loves us
and is mourning too, you see.
Disasters strike, and God gets the blame
from all, including you and me.
So let's get our wits about us
and help everyone who's been condemned,
by sharing what God's blessed each of us with
we gain knowledge of an omnipotent friend.
however, for a select few;
it's a time to deal with heartaches
and to figure out, "What to do?"
Every time this happens
it violates more and more,
and the question asked is, "Why would God...
..allow this, and whatever for?"
God isn't who caused all of this distress
or all individual calamaties,
it's because Adam and Eve picked the fruit
off of one, and not the other trees.
Fire season in California
is overwhelming, to say the least.
Adam and Eve allowed disasters to happen
when they first unleashed the "beast".
I believe my God truly loves us
and is mourning too, you see.
Disasters strike, and God gets the blame
from all, including you and me.
So let's get our wits about us
and help everyone who's been condemned,
by sharing what God's blessed each of us with
we gain knowledge of an omnipotent friend.
— docmaverick, Oct 06, 2009
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Antoinette Mar…
16 years 8 months ago
your Omnipotent friend.....as stated...
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Doc
docmaverick
16 years 8 months ago
I still have my grip on the tune....
lyz
16 years 8 months ago
Dear Doc